Tooth & Nail: Chapter Three
My favourite line from this chapter: "While Jonas would have food in his belly and coin in his pocket, he would always be wanting." You have the skill of describing things vividly with few words. Excellent writing!
In the past I was so flowery with my descriptions that I never got to the story. Thank you so much!!
I’m the other way round, I think!
My favourite line from this chapter: "While Jonas would have food in his belly and coin in his pocket, he would always be wanting." You have the skill of describing things vividly with few words. Excellent writing!
In the past I was so flowery with my descriptions that I never got to the story. Thank you so much!!
I’m the other way round, I think!